Amaya

[Amaya]

Amaya
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[/color] and I've been role playing for several years and I'd like to say that this looks interesting and my timezone is Eastern you can contact me at MSN: [e-mail] I've read the rules so I know the word is juniper I found this site through his MSN name's non servium and my favorite Inuyasha character is Sesshomaru but on here I also play Amaya [/size][/blockquote][/blockquote][/ul]


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[/b] Amaya[/color]
age 550.
appears Basically like the pictures seen above but with the following changes: For Amaya's Youkai form, the green fur's blue, the whiskers are about half of those of the pic, and she has more dragon like claws than bird. For her human hair in both human pics, it's the same length as the body, but the color's a blue/white color and she keeps it bound together at the nape of her neck. Amaya's body is close to the hourglass figure, but not quite. This is due to Amaya's low food intake and high excerise. She does eat, but not as much as one would think she would.
blood Full
species Youkai -- Konjou (spirit) Ryuu
occupation Taiyoukai -- ruler/Lady of the Eastern Lands
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[/b] Haruko [/color]
father Hisashi
sisters none
brothers In order from oldest to youngest: Katsu, Kou, Mamoru, and Sho
other none
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[都Tsuzuki筑]

Sorry, but there are just a few [pretty minor] issues.

First off, you didn't fill out the top half of the template... [The name and nicknames section] also, your images are far too large and in the wrong spot. You can have multiple images, but they all need to be at least a width of 500, otherwise it stretches the page. If you need help with the images, I can do this~

Your powers section appears to be unfinished-- you ended it with a comma, should that be a period?

I'd like a little more personality too-- I wanna see a little more depth to her character.

As for the history... You need to get Sesshomaru and Taisho's approval for just about all of it. I'd also take out the parts about protecting Izayoi and having Inukimi sent away, as their canons aren't filled [Izayoi might be]. Taisho's spot is also in question at the moment. Also, saying she's lord of all the East doesn't sit well with me-- yes, I know it'd be the same thing for Sesshomaru in the West, but I can also think of a few Eastern Tribes who wouldn't answer to a Ryuu... but being princess/leader of just the Eastern Ryuu works, if you want.

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[¡§qüee!]

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I be the KING of the EAST 'round these parts.
>> So, watch yourself, missy. >.<!

Lol. ;o Just kidding, I'll keep him reigned in for ya, but yeah. >> Even if you didn't have to ask the Inu's for permission to use them, you'd have contention with your self title.

[Lord Sesshomaru]

Sesshoumaru stills clames the West as his own.

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[Amaya]

@ Tsuzuki: I didn't see anything about not filling out the top section. And how are the pictures in the wrong place? If I'm using them as reference for Amaya's appearance, wouldn't they be in the appearance section of the bio? as for the history with Izayoi and InuKimi (she doesn't actually have a "true" name. Just Lady Mother) I can have that changed or removed completely. And for the position of Lord of the East, I'm fine with her being the princess/leader of all the ryuu tribes. I was merely comparing Amaya's position to Sesshomaru's to give the understanding of where she was at in the social hierarchy in the Eastern Lands.

[都Tsuzuki筑]

... The big part at the top that says [NAME HERE!] and [NICKNAMES HERE!]? Why would you now fill that out, it's part of the application. And I don't know where you got the 'apperance section' from, as there isn't one... It asks for the pictures right under the big names header, and nowhere else.

Then the OOC section is missing too. What is it with people and messing with this app!? If it's in the original coding, it needs to be there. The notes section at the bottom too, should probably be explained right next to where you write her species.

And yes, I've read the entire manga several times. I know she isn't referenced by name, but 'Inukimi' is shorter than writing anything else and is generally what we refer to her as on here, so don't assume we're all stupid.

[Amaya]

I found this app in the template topic so do not yell at me.

[keo]

-pinches bridge of nose- Just listen to Zuki and put the shit back in the right place. I'll move this damn thing to the graveyard and make you do it all over again if we continue with the arguing.

The stuff on the template is there for a reason... not just to look pretty(though that doesn't hurt either).

[由 Yuna 奈]

The only problems I see right now are the main use of Sesshomaru and the image size. If you get permission from Eichi to use Sesshomaru in your history than that should be fine. I'd say that InuTaisho-sama would be a problem too, but since he's not nearly so active, it is a moot point.

As for the images, please resize them so they don't stretch the page. After that I will accept this.

[都Tsuzuki筑]

Actually, the entire top half of her bio is missing, Yuna-chan. I'm not yelling, I'm just saying that the bio parts are there for a reason.

And I know she removed the top half, because it was there and not filled out when I posted the first decline-- I dunno why she totally deleted it after that, but I sorta needs to be there...

[由 Yuna 奈]

o.o *coughs* Didn't even notice that... now I feel really stupid. Lol I need to learn to pay more attention. xDD

[Amaya]

It's fixed. *throws it up* have at it.

[由 Yuna 奈]