Michael Kururugi

[Michael Kururugi]

General Information
Name:Michael Kururugi
Age:18
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Straight
Race:Human
Profession:High school Student

Personality
One Word to Describe Your Character: Determined
Likes:His Friends
Good food
Time off from demon hunting
water
Dislikes:Miroku
Busy time at the shrine
demons(other than inuyasha)
old food
Use of multiple Shikigami Powers-Due to being a shikigami user Michael can gain multiple elements to use for his Shikigami Attacks
Power/Strength-Michael's power and strength behind the Shikigami attacks seem to be the key aspect for him to pull of the shikigami
Recover Quickly-Though Michael can easily run out of breath he can easily recover from that.
Doesn't hold grudges-Though Michael doesn't get along with everyone he isn't the one to hold grudges now against Miroku thats a different story
able to use weapons-Though Michael is a user of shikigami Michael on occasion dose know how to use weapons
Poor reflexes-Due to still learning the shikigami power Michael can easily lose his balance
Lack of Speed-Though Michael is extremely fast on the field when facing demons he still lacks a little speed to be a good demon hunter like the rest of the gang.
Controlling his anger-Michael has a short fuse at times with the demons him and the gang fight and when that particular demon goes off on and pretty much destroys the demon.
Side:Good
Detailed Personality Description: Michael is a little hesitate at meeting people ever since his last visit to the feudal era where he was accused of being a demon.Once you get to know him he can be a really friendly guy.Once his friends are in danger The evil demons better watch out because his Shikigami power can trouble in power.During battle Michael has sometimes lost a little control of his anger. But all and all Michael is pretty nice guy to get to know. He has been know to be a little too eager at sometimes when it comes to finding out the truth about sometime.

Appearance
Image:
Overall Description:

• Eye Color: Green
  
• Hair Color:brown
  
• Weight: 195
  
• Height:6"1

History

Detailed Personal History: Michael One Day enters the family storage shed in modern-day Japan to retrieve an item for father. After falling through a mysteriously etched pentagram on the floorboards, the player is transported to Feudal Japan. Unfortunately, the villagers mistake the time traveler as a demon and attack. After several close calls, Kururugi comes face to face with InuYasha, who notices the stranger's clothes "look like Kagome's."After introductions with the rest of the cast, the player begins to search for answers as to why Kururugi has been brought back to the feudal era and how to get home. After the defeat of naraku Michael soon started to disappear but slowly started to disappear the others looked on but than he suddenly stopped as he turned around Utsugi's ghost was in front of him saying due to saving him from his pain he would grant Michael one wish he only had one and that was too be to stay with his friends Utsugi nodded and granted Michael this wish thus granting him full Access to travel to and from modern japan and the feudal era.

Other
RP Sample: "dude why didn't you tell me?!" Michael friend nearly yelled at him on the way home from school as Michael was about ready to head to the bone eaters well to head back to the feudal era. "What are you talking about john" Michael denied to his friend "dude don't play dumb i saw that Kagome girl i thought you were making it up but man was i wrong so how long you two been seeing each other?" John Smirked Causing Michael to blush. "Dude were just friends jeez" Michael said in his defense John Chuckled "whatever you say dude" As John was out of site Michael took of to the bone eaters well. "jeez that john just doesn't know when to call it quits i swear" Michael said and than jumped into the bone eaters well heading back to the feudal era to see Inuyasha and the others.
The Word:Floccinaucinihilipilification

[都Tsuzuki筑]

First off, spell check-- this includes the names of characters from the series. [Ex., it's Miroku, not Moroku].

You forgot the one word to describe your character, and I want some more weaknesses-- I'm not so sure some of yours count. His strengths... aren't really strengths either. Shikigami powers are, and being able to quickly learn to control his power is, not just learning more. You could say he has some demon hunting training, rather than demon hunting with Inuyasha. And I have no idea what you mean by 'elments of attack'.

I'd also like to see a little more personality-- it's okay if you have to make some of it up.

Read the rules to find The Word

[Michael Kururugi]

modified a bit

[都Tsuzuki筑]

You still haven't spell checked, and you still need to find The Word.

And I still don't get your weaknesses. Give me things that will impair his ability to fight or survive. 'Certain foods', 'getting water' and 'certain demons' don't count.

[Michael Kururugi]

any better

[¡§qüee!]

Alright~~ Besides the spell check, since Zuki has already gone over that twice with you~~

You need to put spaces every so often. Especially:

One Word to Describe Your Character:Determined

There should be a space between Character and Determined, it makes it easier for us to read, and therefore faster for us to approve your character~~ ^^

Second, your weaknesses are not labeled, you have a space between Strengths and weaknesses, but you don't have the label of "Weaknesses" to let us know that you've started listing them. Also! There is a seperate thread where you can list your "powers" and "Abilities" in more detail, so you won't have to explain them in here.

Your personality good be a bit longer~~ Although, I've been informed that this is a cast character, so perhaps it won't be required of you~~ ^^

Also, what are the time (5 min); (3 min) for? Do they have an significance, and if they do can you elaborate on it~~

Spell Check. Please and thank you~~

[都Tsuzuki筑]

I just spell checked for you. THIRTY FOUR words changed-- the button is there for a reason! Use it!

And you misspelled the following canon names-- It's MIROKU and KAGOME not MOROKU and KOGOME.

In the future, post outside of the [/b], as that stuff should not be bold.

Just go though once more and check your punctuation and capitilization, please.

[都Tsuzuki筑]

Better~

Approved