Jamie Lee Nikkou {Done}

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General Information
Name: Jamie Lee Nikkou
Nickname: Lee
Age: 150 ,but looks 15.
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Race: Half-demon cat
Profession: Loner

Personality
One Word to Describe Your Character: Out going
Likes:

• Fish
  
• Playing around
  
• humans
  
• Some demons
  
• Money
  
• Climbing trees
  
• Dancing
  
• Singing
  

Dislikes:

• Water
  
• Kids
  
• Any type of dog
  
• Killing
  
• Innocence people dying
  
• Monkeys
  
• Evil humans and or demons

Strengths:

• Fighting
  
• Running
  
• Jumping
  
• Sword fighting
  
• Getting boys to notice her
  
• Able to fall asleep anywhere she wants
  
• Dancing
  
• Annoying the hell out of someone

Weaknesses:

• Water
  
• Dogs
  
• Her father
  
• Vampires
  
• Love
  
• Trusting people
  
• Breaking up with someone
  
• Waking up early
  
• Singing

Side: Good
Detailed Personality Description: Jamie is fun,out-going, active,hyper,and strong. She sometimes is shy and quiet. But shes mostly the most out going, hyper active girl you have seen. She's barely sad or depressed. When she's depressed it's like there's nothing fun to do in the world. She is usually smile or laughing you never see her sad or even depressed about something. She is very skilled at any type of fight before her mother died she was taught how to fight. Ever since Jamie's father payed for someone to kill her mother Jamie had trust problems with everyone and everything so it is very hard to make friends or anything. Other then that Jamie's the most happiest half-demon you will ever meet she's always joking or playing around no matter what.

Jamie can convince anyone about anything, even if the anything is a complete lie. She is sort of a boy killer if you will, always flirting around with them and taking advantage of them. It's rare to see her with just one guy at a time, rather she is seen surrounded by them. She's perky but also sly and mysterious. Most boys fall head over heals in love with her at first sight, and if not she can always find them falling at her feet like slaves.

Appearance
Image:
Full Demon form:


Overall Description:

• Eye Color: Red
  
• Hair Color: Sliver
  
• Weight:113
  
• Height: 5 ft 3in.

History

Detailed Personal History: Jamie was born in an alley in abandoned village. The village was old and spooky. Her mother took care of her till she was 5 years old. When she was five years old her mother was killed right in front of her. Her mother was human and her father was a demon ,but she wasn't a half breed because her blood was mostly like her fathers than her mothers. The only thing that was left from her mother was her ring that Jamie wears today. Her mother was shot by a stranger. Her father was there watching,smiling evilly. She ran away from him because she never knew what he was going to do to her,but she had a bad feeling about it. And ever since then she's had horrible dreams.

The Word? Mechaj

[都Tsuzuki筑]

A little more personality please

[คאєℓ]

I fixed it!

[syeira]

Yeah, holy hell, you're gonna need a ton more than that. I was about to post when I saw you'd beat me by a couple hours. -.-

[คאєℓ]

Okay I fixed it agian!

[syeira]

To be honest, your writing skills suck ass. There's supposed to be spaces after commas, and you're missing a few conjunctions in various places.

How are running, jumping, fighting and fencing her strengths? Is she a fast runner, a high jumper? A good fighter, a skilled swordswoman? And not be be discouraging or anything, but jeez, pretty much everyone on this site is good at all of those, even if they don't have to mention it in their strengths. And, even though she's only a half-demon, she's half cat, so it's kind of expected she'll be able to run and jump good.

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[คאєℓ]

Okay I changed it up a little.

[syeira]

I still have a lot of issues with her strengths, but, heh. If you don't want her to have any actual good strengths, I guess that's your problem.

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