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Post by Hiro the O.G.™ on Jul 8, 2008 19:46:33 GMT -7
Name: Hirohito Takahashi
Alias/Nicknames: Hiro
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 15
Personality: Helpful, trustworthy, kind but when a friend or ally is in harm's way, his fury becomes extremely strong
Appearance: Kind, strong semi-muscular.
Clothing/Armor:Two metal shoulderpads and a white shirt with a black robe that is very loose, some loose fitting black pants, much like Inuyasha's outfit, but not quite the same.
History: Village was destroyed by Amoi and killed his family, he seeks vengance on amoi.
Likes: Animals, kind people and food.
Dislikes: Being betrayed, hurting someone he cares for and evil demons.
Allies(optional): None, yet.
Enemies(optional): Amoi and Amoi's goons.
Occupation(optional): Cooking and swords.
Weapons: A century old samurai sword owned by his grandfather, Ronin.
Abilites: Able to become invisible for 7 seconds, and the Slash Wave. sends 7 ethereal strikes to an opponent in one swing.
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Post by syeira on Jul 8, 2008 21:16:37 GMT -7
Use our form please.
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Post by Hiro the O.G.™ on Jul 8, 2008 22:36:15 GMT -7
General information :Helpful, trustworthy, kind but when a friend or ally is in harm's way, his fury becomes extremely strongName: HirohitoNickname:HiroAge:15Gender:MaleSexuality:StraightRace:A human with a little demon in him (From his demon uncle (human, demon, half-demon, etc. If it is a demon, please specify what kind of demon) Profession:Swordsman and chef (what is it that they do? Are they a priestess, demon slayer, monk, etc?) Personality: Helpful, trustworthy, kind but when a friend or ally is in harm's way, his fury becomes extremely strongOne word to describe your character:Likes:Animals, kind people and food.Dislikes:Being betrayed, hurting someone he cares for and evil demons.Strengths:1Endurance of pain (a severe wound wont nessisarily slow him down)2. Love and compassion for peaceful demons and kind humans. 3 Ability to become invisible 4. Able to reason with people before they hurt someone. 5 Will gladly die to save the people he cares for (At least five) Weakness 1. When someone he cares about gets hurt, he will do ANYTHING to get revenge 2. Amoi's goons are on the lookout for him 3. Can't swim (At least three) Side: Good (what side are they on? Good, neutral, evil?) Detailed personality description: Hiro was in his village and all of a sudden Amoi raided it and killed all but him. He tryed to help his Grandfather, Ronin. A legendary swordsman but couldnt. Ronin gave Hiro his great blade, in which can send out seven strikes in one stroke. Hiro looks forward to slaying Amoi and will meet new friends gladly along the way. Appearance A somewhat tall young man with shoulder length black hair and a scar on his neck. Somewhat muscular and is always observing nature along the way.Image: (You may write a paragraph of description instead.) Overall description:Helpful, trustworthy, kind but when a friend or ally is in harm's way, his fury becomes extremely strong
Appearance: Kind, strong semi-muscular.- Eye color: Sharp Blue
- Hair Color: Black
- Weight: 145 lbs.
- Height: 6'4
HistoryDetailed Personal History:Helpful, trustworthy, kind but when a friend or ally is in harm's way, his fury becomes extremely strong
Appearance: Kind, strong semi-muscular. (At least one paragraph) Detailed Version One History: (At least one paragraph) The word?
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Post by Naraku on Jul 9, 2008 5:57:14 GMT -7
..........hmmmm wow
1.) Take off that information next to "General Information" That is there only to be the topic for the name n etc
2.) Take off the underline and take off the descriptions on the appearance and Personality it says put "ONE" word that describes ur character so pick "ONE" word to use.
3.) Your Overall in the Appearance has nothing to do with his personality we wanna know what he looks like so in overall what does ur character look like
4.) Your history is the Appearance copied
5.) Read the All the rules and you will know "The Word"
6.) All your answers that are in bold take em off (Note: I said ur answers not the question)
7.) If your character has a problem with another character make sure it's in your bio
8.) Delete all the helpful hints that has these ( and the words inside)
So fix those and you should be good
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Post by Hiro the O.G.™ on Jul 9, 2008 13:23:57 GMT -7
General Information Name: Hirohito Takahashi Nickname: Hiro Age: 15 Gender:Male Sexuality:Straight Race: Human, with a quarter demon in him from his uncle. Profession: Swordsman. PersonalityOne word to describe your character: Kind. Likes: Food, kind people and animals. Dislikes: Evil demons, betrayal and water. (Will explain later) Strengths: 1.Ability to become invisible for 7 seconds. 2.Slash Wave, able to send seven strikes out, in one stroke of the sword. 3.His kindness and understanding. 4. High endurance, a fatal strike wont necessarily stop him if someone he loves in in danger. Weakness Water, rage when someone is hurt, he will do almost anything to get revenge. Side: Good Detailed personality description: A strong, brave adventurer who can easily be trusted, but cannot easily trust another. He is honest about everything without trying to be harsh. He will protect anyone he cares about. If someone he loves is hurt, he will seek revenge. He acts optimistic, but is depressed and suicidal and his only reason for living is too see that Amoi is dead. Appearance A tall, strong looking teenager. He wears two metal shoulderpads and a white shirt with a black robe that is very loose, some loose fitting black pants, much like Inuyasha's outfit, but not quite the same. He has a sword sheathed on the left side of his waist. He has sharp blue eyes and a mysterious black slash looking scar on his neck. A light blue ribbon is pinned on his robe. Overall description:- Eye color: Sharp Blue
- Hair Color: Black
- Weight: 145 lbs
- Height:6'2
HistoryDetailed Personal History: Hiro was in his village and all of a sudden Amoi raided it and killed all but him. He tryed to help his Grandfather, Ronin. A legendary swordsman but couldnt. Ronin gave Hiro his great blade, in which can send out seven strikes in one stroke. Hiro's mother was slain instantly along with his unborn sister. His little brother had drowned when Hiro was 7. Hiro feels responsible for not helping him. Hiro looks forward to slaying Amoi and will meet new friends gladly along the way. The word? Caligula
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Post by syeira on Jul 9, 2008 15:54:17 GMT -7
Approved. Hehe... Gl with trying to slay Amoi. >D
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) "Bunny says, "Hiro RP's as : Hirohito (AKA Hiro), Kyosai, Shippo and Ginkotsu."
