Yuri ~Akina's replacment~

[akina]

General Information

Name:Yuri

Nickname:Heatless bitch

Age:Unknown, looks 19

Gender:Female

Sexuality:Straight

Race:Wolf demon

Profession:Dark Miko killer


Personality

One word to describe your character:Cold

Likes:
Cold nights
full moon
demon
blood
killing

Dislikes:
New Moon
people who are stronger than her
lust
lossing control

Strengths:
Mijo
Wolf form
her lust for blood
fearless
rage

Weakness
New Moon
stubborn
cold blooded killer

Side: Evil

Detailed personality description:
How do I say this nicly.....hmmm, Yuri hates everyone and wants fresh blood as her nail polish everyday....yep as nice as its going to get, Yuri is a heartless bitch who wants Aomis' and Narakus' head on a golden platter, why? explained in history, she hates being weak and wants to be the newest evil.
Her adoptive parents forced her to use her miko powers to her own benifit, making her turn against them. Which caused her to turn to the evil side.
She feels no pity, sadness, or any other emotion thats not worth her time, which, basiclly is no emotion at all.
She also can't feel love which in some cases makes her weaker, so, she trys to alter this by obtaining more power, the Jewel Shards, she hopes to own them by the end of her journey.

Appearance

Image:

Other than the face image, she has a curved body and a slender cat like figure(like cat woman >_>).


Overall description:

• Eye color:Red
  
  
• Hair Color:Black
  
  
• Weight:155
  
  
• Height:5'8''

History

Detailed Personal History:
Yuris' past is a bit lost, all thats known is that Yuri's parents abandoned her near a frozen river and two hell demons raised her from then on, When she was young she found out about ehr powers and trained in archery, sense she was already evil she was dubbed Dark Miko, given this statment made her pissed, she wanted to be Ruler Dark Miko.(better explained Zuki? =.=)
She wanted to be the best of the best, she even killed the two hell demons that had adopted her, when Naraku and Amoi came to over, she wanted to kill them, so she went to assassiant Naraku until Akina stopped her.
Now that Akina is out of the way, only Yuna can stand in her way, and she will kill anyone to get to Naraku.

And after Naraku, Yuri has a special plan for Amoi, then, she hopes that She will be the top evil, and before all of this, she is finishing Akina for good, hey the womans' dying anyways, might as well end her miseriable life.
But she also wants to destroy Kiloto and Riku, making Akina seem like a figment of her imagination, why? Its still unknown.

Detailed Version One History: never RPed on v.1

The word? egotistical

[Naraku]

umm I guess Approved

[akina]

gah ty ^^ Xd

[都Tsuzuki筑]

No, there is no way she can be 5'8" and only 125 lbs. I'm 5'5" and I weigh slightly more than that, and I'm not overweight in the slightest.

The word is wrong. I also see quite a few misspellings, some of character names-- I'd proofread it if I were you.

Also, a demon with pure powers at birth? I don't think so. I also want to see more in her history, and another scentence or two in personality, and I mean real descriptive stuff not just fluff.

Status: unapproved.

[akina]

ok what about now?
x.x;

[都Tsuzuki筑]

One is born with miko power, one does not learn it. You could say that she trained her already present power though.

I think you could get more in-depth with the personality, and then expain more in the history why she's this way-- was it her childhood? Is she psychologically unstable?

Also, since your picture is just a face shot, methinks you should give a description of her along with it, so we all know for future reference.

Your character is still quite underweight-- the target weight for a 5'8" woman is somewhere around 146 lbs.


Casade is not the word.

I don't mean to pick on you Aki, but I'm going to get tougher when it comes to the new characters, especially ones done by long-time members and staff-- You may hate me for it now, but I think in the long run it'll be for the best.

[都Tsuzuki筑]

Aki, this still hasn't been approved >.> Fix it

[akina]

fixed it

[都Tsuzuki筑]

approved.