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Post by eien on Jun 15, 2009 0:22:33 GMT -7
General Information Name: Eien Naruhi (A-E-N nah-roo-he) Nickname: (she occasionally says her name is Naru) Age: 17 Gender: Female Sexuality: Heterosexual Race: Ice Hanyou Profession: Runaway
Personality One Word to Describe Your Character: Dignified Likes: - People with manners
- Staying clean
- "Commoner" food- i/e ramen
- Not being considered a burden
- Learning new skills
- Meeting new people (but ultimately, she likes her alone time)
Dislikes: - Getting dirty
- Being treated like a porcelin dol
- Thunderstorms (and loud noises in general)
- Fighting (particularly when it is for no good reason)
- Her father
- Being a girly girl(granted she has her times where she wants to be feminine but over all- it's too much of a hassle)
- Snakes
Strengths: - Is a quick learner, if she sees someone do something, she can easily learn that skill as well.
- She's speedy, when she wants to get out of a situation she can run like a gazelle (as long as she doesn't have long, formal clothes to hold her back).
- She is skilled in the art of conversation, she doesn't know about her demon powers yet, because she has never been put in a situation to use them (she's always talked her way out of dangerous situations)
- She is calm and collected and keeps a level head in stressful situations
- Can naturally withstand extremely cold temperatures, and can control the element of ice(though she has yet to figure it out)
Weaknesses: - Because she is so light, she can't do a lot of damage.
- Has yet to figure out how to read people
- Is very naive
- Is very opinionated and stubborn, and isn't open to new ideas, if she feels that her's is good.
- Gets sick extremely easy
- Isn't used to being on her own, nor does she know how to live in the outside world.
(since I was asked to give some physical weaknesses, I've composited a list:)- Because she is short she has short arms and legs, and is hard for her to reach places
- Because of an injury as a child, her left knee goes out, and there is slight hesitation on it when running
- Her eyes go out of focus when looking at the same thing for a long time (i/e Double vision)
- She has only formal sword training, and does not know how to fight with people who fight "dirty" and do not follow formal regulations
- She is a terrible cook
- She is very clumbsy, and tends to always have a broken or sprained bone (or pulled muscle)
- has arthritius and it makes it hard for her to move her joints
- Overheats easy (and often faints because of it)
- She is overly cautious, and is always scared of "getting caught" doing something wrong
- Has an extremely quiet voice and often people cannot hear her.
- Lets her compassion for young children and small animals get in the way of her own well being
- Is allergic to kiwi, garlic, grass, wheat, pollen, bee stings, and ant bites
- Has a low indurance for pain and tends to be a cry baby.
(happy now?) Side: Neutral Detailed Personality Description: Eien is quiet, after having an isolated childhood, she doesn't know how to properly get aquainted with people. She isn't sure whether to trust people immediately or if it is more proper to wait some time first. She never forgets her manners, and always acts like royalty, even in the middle of nowhere. She talks in the politest of forms, rarely using contractions when she speaks, unless she gets mad. She yearns deeply to have friends, but can never fnd the time to open up to anybody to actually hold that position. She hates being treated like something that can be broken, and refuses to be the kind of person stowed away and be a trinket to look at. She is content being alone, as she has been most of her life. She is naive when it comes down to relationships, she doesn't know what love is, nor how to deal with it, in fact, she has never seen a relationship, nor had feelings for someone in that way so she doesn't know what to expect with this hidden emotion of "love".
She respects people that are independent, and powerful, but doesn't see how so many people with these characteristics have to be abrassive and rough to the rest of the world. Genuinely a sweet girl, Eien wants nothing more than peace and harmony wherever she goes. She's not the fighting type, and when it comes down to it, she much rather get into a battle of the wits than one of brawn. When such experiences do happen, she uses her knowlege, quick wit, and manners to get her out of binds, her soft, sweet face also helps too- she knows this too. However, she is very humble. She will not accept the fact out loud that she is in fact beautiful, smart and friendly (even if on the inside she knows it).
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Overall Description:- Eye Color: Dark brown (almost black)
- Hair Color: Black
- Weight: 100 lbs
- Height: 5'3"
History
Detailed Personal History: Eien's mother was a mistress to a lord. Her father, was a demon who seduced her into beleiving that if she allowed him one night with her, that she would then consumate a child with her Lord... a boy none the less. Her mother had been trying for years to get pregnant, and they had all ended in still births or miscarriages, she was desperate. Soon Eien's mother was pregnant... with twins. Eien being the child of the demon, her twin brother, the son of the lord. During labor, Eien's mother lost too much blood, and soon after giving birth to the two, extrodinarily weak children, died. For eight months after the birth, the twins, Eien and Tsukanoma were fighting to stay alive. They were both frail children, and soon, and after eight months, one turned for the better(Eien) and the other, the worse. When she was eight months old Eien's twin, half brother died.
The lord took on Eien as his own, after all, he thought she was. However, as Eien grew into a young child, he could see otherwise. Eien looked nothing like him, or her mother. He knew then the truth. He kept his "child" sheltered from the eyes of the populus, scared that someone would see the same characteristics that he saw. Eien was isolated, other than a few, select, trusted tutors and some hired service (maids and what not) She was not exposed to the outside world. When Eien turned thirteen, her father hired countless hitmen to assasinate his daughter. When she turned fifteen, she was still under the impression that it was some outside force that wanted her dead... until she over heard her father talking to a veiled figure about killing her, and doing so to make it look like a "terrible accident" She became more cautious, knowing just who was planning her death. For two years, she planned an escape from her lifelong prison, and unltimately, the death sentence that went with it, now she has finally accomplished such a feat, and
The Word? Mecha [/blockquote][/color]
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Post by 都Tsuzuki筑 on Jun 18, 2009 4:27:58 GMT -7
Twins being born with different fathers is inredibly rare, but not impossible. So all you need to do is tell me what kind of hanyou she is =P Dog? Cat? Wolf? Horse? Etc.
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Post by eien on Jun 23, 2009 19:54:21 GMT -7
The point is that it was supposed to be rare. Actually, since she doesn't know herself, I figured it would be best not to include it in the profile, after all do we want everyone else to be omniciant? If that's the case, I figure I can choose a type of demon, truth was I hadn't much thought about it, didn't see why it was all too important to her background story? But I suppose I could make her half ice demon... ^^; I guess... I'll go change that now?
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Post by 由 Yuna 奈 on Jun 23, 2009 20:04:31 GMT -7
I would like to see one more strength(since the minimum is five) and another physical weakness besides how light she is. Other than that it looks good to me.
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Post by eien on Jun 23, 2009 20:08:27 GMT -7
I can understand the extra strength but you want overall seven weaknesses?
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Post by 由 Yuna 奈 on Jun 23, 2009 20:23:00 GMT -7
Well I can accept it with only one physical weakness, but... for some reason I just don't know. If she only had three weaknesses, one physical weakness would be fine. But since you wrote she has six... it seems like two would be a good number. If you can't think of anything though I guess I can accept it anyway.
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Post by eien on Jun 25, 2009 12:56:15 GMT -7
I figured all of her physical weaknesses would be implied by what I have listed as her other weaknesses: for example because she is naive about the real world, she probabally wouldn't know how to fight or function in real life situations. Not to mention if she gets sick easily, she probabally isn't up to fighting conditions most the time anyways... But if you want me to start listing other weaknesses I'll gladly do it.
Besides, I'm not making her to be a fighting character, and I have one physical weakness already, which, according to the outline is all i need right? so where does the logic of mandating another weaknes make sense? I'm not meaning to sound smart or anything, but I'm afraid that I don't understand where you're comming from... I thought that I had followed the directions as specified (I accidentally forgot to put in the last strength when filing it out, that was my error, I'll admit it) and I don't understand why I'm not being accepted for it... >.< I hope the weaknesses I added are up to standard.
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Post by 由 Yuna 奈 on Jun 25, 2009 14:52:39 GMT -7
O.o well, you only needed to add one... um...
Approved
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